workshop questions

-yes
-no, "Rough Draft" ---> "Traditional to Year Round Schooling"
-yes

-no, opens with questoins
-kind of, could be more developing of the problem
-yes, vouching for YRS
-no, asks a question but will be revised

-yes, 3 concepts in thesis
-close
-close
-yes
-no, more research needed
-yes
-close, convincing logic but could be more in depth
-no, need better transitions, don't really flow into each other

-no, need to include the opposition more
-no
-no, but with more opposing stances it will have this

-need revisions to not sound redundant
-yes, but could be made more clear with detail
-yes

-3 on the rough draft but will final will have 6
-MLA will be used
-yes
-most part yes, more research would be nice
-it will
-it will
-it will contain 5 sources